Question

【题目】短文改错

Dear Ms.J.K.Rowling，

Glad to write to you.I like reading all of your Harry Potter book.A few days before，I listened to a radio programme about you.Now I know what was at home and in others countries that you teach English before you started writing books.

I also know that only when your baby daughter was asleep you write the first book，so you worked on them for five years.What difficult the job is！Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you.I hope I can be as successful as you when I grow up.Thank you for spending time read my letter.

Yours sincerely，

Michele

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Ms.J.K.Rowling，

Glad to write to you.I like reading all of your Harry Potter .A few days ，I listened to a radio programme about you.Now I know was at home and in countries that you English before you started writing books.

I also know that only when your baby daughter was asleep you write the first book，so you worked on for five years. difficult the job is！Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud you.I hope I can be as successful as you when I grow up.Thank you for spending time my letter.

Yours sincerely，

Michele

【解析】

1．根据前面的代词all可知，《哈利·波特》系列有好几本书，故用复数形式。

2．分析句意可知，此处指离现在几天前，须用ago。

3．根据句子结构分析可知，此处为强调句型作宾语从句。根据强调句型结构可知应用it，构成it is...that...。

4．根据后面的名词countries可知，此处为形容词作定语。

5．根据句子前的was和后面的started可知，此处用一般过去时。

6．前面用only修饰状语从句，主句须倒装；根据句意可知，表示过去的可能性，此处加could。

7．根据句意可知，此处指前面的the first book，须用单数。

8．根据后面的形容词可知，对形容词感叹须用How。

9．根据句意可知“对……自豪”须用固定短语be proud of。

10．spend...(in)doing...“花费……做某事”。