Question

【题目】 短文改错（共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m writing to tell you how is going on in our school — a basketball match to be holding next month. The match will be played among Xinhua Middle School Basketball Team and ours. Now we are organizing a basketball team, included a teacher as a player. We honest think you are the right one, so I’d like invite you to join our team. We had also planned to do some training to build up our physical strengths and improve our skills. I am sure it will be a great fun. All of us are expecting him to come.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m writing to tell you is going on in our school — a basketball match to be next month. The match will be played Xinhua Middle School Basketball Team and ours. Now we are organizing a basketball team, a teacher as a player. We think you are the right one, so I’d like invite you to join our team. We also planned to do some training to build up our physical and improve our skills. I am sure it will be great fun. All of us are expecting to come.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

第一处:how→what。分析句子结构可知,tell you后面是宾语从句,从句缺少主语,且表示"所……的事情",故用

what。

第二处:holding→held。此处表示一些有关即将举行的一场篮球赛的事情。match与hold之间是被动关系,且"

举行"是将来的事,故应用"to be held"作后置定语。

第三处:among→between。这是新华中学篮球队和我们学校篮球队之间的比赛。表示两者之间应用between。

第四处:included→including。我们正在组织一个篮球队,包括一名教师队员。include与其逻辑主语a basketball

team之间是主谓关系,故应用including。

第五处:honest→honestly。应用副词来修饰动词think。honestly"诚实地,真的"。

第六处:invite前加to。would like to do sth.意为"愿意做某事",为固定短语。

第七处:had→have。此处表示到目前为止已经完成的动作,并不表示"过去的过去",所以用现在完成时。

第八处:strengths→strength。训练的目的是增强体力和提高球技。strength表示"力量,体力"时是不可数名词。

表示"优势,长处"时是可数名词,但不符合此处的语境。

第九处:去掉a。fun"乐趣"为不可数名词,其前不用不定冠词,故a多余。

第十处:him→you。此处指代书信的对象Mr. Green,故应改为you。上文中多次出现的"you"亦是提示。