Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day a young man announces that he had the most beautiful heart. A large crowd both admired his heart for its perfection. A young man was very proud of it. Suddenly, an old man appeared and said, "Your heart is not nearly as beautifully as mine." The crowd or the young man looked at the old man’s heart. It was beaten strongly, but full of scars. The young man laughed and said, "You must joking." The old man said, "Yours is perfect but every scars represents a person to who I have given my love because they remind me of the love we shared. So now do you see what does true beauty is? "

Answer 1

【答案】

One day a young man that he had the most beautiful heart. A large crowd admired his heart for its perfection. young man was very proud of it. Suddenly, an old man appeared and said, ＂Your heart is not nearly as as mine.＂ The crowd the young man looked at the old man’s heart. It was strongly, but full of scars. The young man laughed and said, ＂You must joking.＂ The old man said, ＂Yours is perfect but every represents a person to I have given my love because they remind me of the love we shared. So now do you see what true beauty is?

【解析】

【文章大意】什么才算真正的美?老人布满疤痕的心脏，还是年轻人完好无损的心脏?其实，真正的美是给予。

第一处：announces→announced。考查动词的时态。＂One day＂及全文的主体时态暗示本句应用一般过去时。

第二处：both→all。考查代词的用法。A large crowd表明所涉及的人数为三者或三者以上，故此处用all。

第三处：A→The。考查定冠词的用法。此处为年轻人第二次出现，表示特指，应用定冠词。

第四处：beautifully→beautiful。考查形容词的用法。在固定结构as...as...＂和……一样……＂中应用形容词。

第五处：or→and。考查连词。＂The crowd＂和＂the young man＂为并列的两个主语，故此处应用and连接。

第六处：beaten→beating。考查非谓语动词。It指代the old man’s heart，此处表示主动进行的动作，故改beaten为beating。

第七处：joking前加be。考查动词时态。must后面接动词原形，而此处表示正在进行的动作，故应用be joking。

第八处：scars→scar。考查名词单复数。every后面接名词单数，故此处应用scar。

第九处：who→whom。考查关系代词。介词后面接指人的宾格whom。

第十处：去掉does。考查句式。what引导的宾语从句为陈述句语序，而is为系动词，what为其表语。助动词does多余，需要删除。