Question

【题目】书面表达

体裁	话题
提纲作文，电子邮件	近况及为全运会做准备

（2017·天津）假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。

（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；

（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有机会重访天津。

注意：

（1）词数不少于100；

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th National Games

Dear Mrs. Green,

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Yours,

Li Jin

Answer 1

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【参考范文】

Dear Mrs. Green,

I’m so glad to hear from you. I’m writing to tell you something about my life and study in recent days. I’m very busy with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near,. Every day, I have to spend most of my time in studying. As a result, I don’t have enough time to take exercise, what’s worse, I don’t communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.

By the way, I am now a volunteer for the the 13th National Games, which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin. In order to be a qualified volunteer, I have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it.

Will you please pay a visit to Tianjin again so that we may meet again, for I miss you very much!

Looking forward to seeing you a second time.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。