Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I asked Jack, a friend of mine, what has happened to him that night. He said that he had just got into bed on about half past eleven when the floor began to shake under him. The bed was also started shaking. He jumped out of his bed rapid and wanted to turn the light on. But the floor was shaking such violently that he could hardly reach the lamp. It seemed to take him long time to get to it and turned it on. Then he went to look out of the window. He saw that the houses on the other side of the street was also shaking. Then he knew that was happening — an earthquake! He quickly put on his clothes and ran out into the street to waiting until it was safe to go back inside.

Answer 1

【答案】

I asked Jack, a friend of mine, what happened to him that night. He said that he had just got into bed about half past eleven when the floor began to shake under him. The bed also started shaking. He jumped out of his bed and wanted to turn the light on. But the floor was shaking violently that he could hardly reach the lamp. It seemed to take him long time to get to it and it on. Then he went to look out of the window. He saw that the houses on the other side of the street also shaking. Then he knew was happening — an earthquake! He quickly put on his clothes and ran out into the street to until it was safe to go back inside.

【解析】

第一处：has→had 时间是that night，且由asked可知应该用过去完成时，故将has改为had。

第二处：on→at 具体的时间点前面用介词at表示＂在＂。

第三处：bed后的was去掉 start一般不能用被动形式。

第四处：rapid→rapidly 修饰动词jumped应用副词。

第五处：such→so so/such…that…中，修饰副词violently应用so。

第六处：long前加a 此处表示＂一段时间＂，通常用单数，故应加a。a long time一段很长的时间。

第七处：turned→turn 不定式后的并列结构的形式和时态应该一致，故用动词原形。

第八处：was→were 主语是houses，谓语动词用复数形式。

第九处：that→what 引导宾语从句，在从句充当主语，表示＂什么事情＂，用what。

第十处：waiting→wait to在此是不定式中的to，表目的，动词应用一般式，故waiting改为wait。