Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learn to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything which I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised myself to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself for simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was a good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】

When I first to write in English, I ran into difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised to keep a diary. I followed his and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy to myself as I was learning to express myself simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was a good one. Their words were great encouragement to me.

【解析】

第一节 短文改错

第一处：learn→learned 根据＂ran＂可知应该用一般过去时，故把learn改为learned。

第二处：much→many many修饰可数名词，much修饰不可数名词，difficulties是可数名词，故把much 改为many。

第三处：which→that或去掉which 定语从句中，当先行词是everything时，关系代词用that，此处关系词在从句中作宾语，可省略，故把which改为that或去掉which。

第四处：myself→me advise sb. to do sth.为固定搭配，意为＂建议某人做某事＂，故把myself改为me。

第五处：advices→advice advice是不可数名词，故把advices改为advice。

第六处：talk→talking enjoy doing为固定搭配，意为＂喜欢做、乐于做＂，故把talk改为talking。

第七处：for→in in English为固定搭配，意为＂用英语＂，故把for改为 in。

第八处：showed后加it show sth. to sb.为固定搭配，意为＂把某物展示给某人看＂，故在showed后加it，it指代前面的a story。

第九处：very→so so…that…意为＂如此……以致……＂，故把very改为so。

第十处：an→a encouragement前有great修饰，不需要用an修饰，故把an改为a。