Question

【题目】假定你是班长李华，请根据以下内容给新任外教Smith先生写一封信, 向他表示欢迎并转达同学们对英语课的希望：

1.介绍西方文化；

2.组织多样活动；

3.关注学生发音, 提高听说能力。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已为你写好。

Dear Mr.Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you.Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr.Smith,

I’m writing on behalf of my class to extend our warm welcome to you.Here are some of our expectations for your English class.

First, we’d like to have topics in class about Western culture.We are all very interested in knowing more about the culture behind the language.Besides, we’d appreciate various activities to get everyone involved and to make classes interesting.Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we think we are weak in it.And we are all eager to have our listening and speaking abilities improved.We hope that we are able to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do.

Thank you very much.We are looking forward to meeting you soon!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据提示给新任外教Smith先生写一封信，欢迎他的到来并转达同学们对英语课的希望。书信内容包括：介绍西方文化；介绍西方文化；关注学生发音，提高听说能力这三个方面。要点要全面，不能有遗漏，注意语意的连贯性。作文词数在100词左右，开头不计入总词数。注意书信的格式，使用高级词汇和常用句型。

亮点说明：连接词方面：范文使用First, Besides, Last but not least, And等表示列举和衔接句子，是作文显得条理清晰、衔接紧密；

词汇与短语方面：appreciate, various, guidance, are interested in, get sb involved, are eager to do sth, have sth improved等，高级词汇的使用提升了作文的层次；

语法方面：状语从句because we think we are weak in it；宾语从句hope that we are able to speak English fluently and clearly；方式状语从句just as you native speakers do等，语法知识运用娴熟，使作文的内容变得更加丰富。