Question

【题目】Correction 3(2017届 广西南宁、钦州高三模考)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Friday, our class was invited an old craftsman to teach us how to making dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he shows us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him or watched attentively. Then we started to have a try itself. The old man walked around and helped us patient. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking on the figurines, we were all very exciting. We hope we can have more activity of this kind!

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Friday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to dough figurine(面人).When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome and two boy helped him with the tool box. First, he us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him watched attentively. Then we started to have a try . The old man walked around and helped us . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking the figurines, we were all very . We hope we can have more of this kind!

【解析】

第一处：句意：上星期五，我们班邀请了一位老艺人教我们如何做面人。此处不应该是＂被邀请＂，不能用被动语态。故去掉was。

第二处：句意：上星期五，我们班邀请了一位老艺人教我们如何做面人。teach sb. how to do sth.是固定搭配，指＂教给某人做某事＂。故making改为make。

第三处：give sb. a warm welcome指＂热烈欢迎某人＂。故warm前面加a。

第四处：文章一开始有时间状语Last Friday，所以用一般过去时态。故shows改为showed。

第五处：句意：我们都站在他的周围，认真地观察。stood和watched是顺承关系，而不是选择。故or改为and。

第六处：句子的主语是we，所以此处指＂我们自己尝试＂。故itself改为ourselves。

第七处：修饰谓语动词helped要用副词，指＂耐心地帮助我们＂。故patient改为patiently。

第八处：look at是固定搭配。故on改为at。

第九处：此处指＂我们非常兴奋＂，表示内心的感觉用-ed结尾的形容词。故exciting改为excited。

第十处：句意：我们希望我们能有更多的这种活动！此处应该用名词的复数形式。故activity改为activities。