Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My bicycle is old, but it isn’t useless. Many of my friend tell me that I should buy a new bicycle, but my old one still works good. I can ride it to the stores, to the park, to school. It is such old that no one will steal it. Someone might steal the new bicycle, but not an old one. Last week my mother’s motorcycle what she rode had a problem, so she borrow my bicycle to visit her friend. Sometimes a bicycle is most useful than a motorcycle! We should not throw things away just because of they are old. We should use things till they become useful.

Answer 1

【答案】

My bicycle is old, but it isn’t useless. Many of my tell me that I should buy a new bicycle, but my old one still works . I can ride it to the stores, to the park, to school. It is old that no one will steal it. Someone might steal new bicycle, but not an old one. Last week my mother’s motorcycle she rode had a problem, so she my bicycle to visit her friend. Sometimes a bicycle is useful than a motorcycle! We should not throw things away just because they are old. We should use things till they become

【解析】

第一处：friend改为friends。many of意为＂……之中的许多＂，of后接复数名词。此处是指我朋友之中的许多人。

第二处：good改为well。＂运转良好＂应表达为work well。

第三处：to school前添加and。使用三个并列单词或短语时，最后一个前应加并列连词and。

第四处：such改为so。old为形容词，表达＂如此……以至于……＂时，应使用＂so…that…＂结构。

第五处：the改为a。句意：有人可能会偷一辆新自行车。＂一辆新自行车＂，此处表示泛指，应使用不定冠词a。

第六处：what改为which。which she rode是定语从句，先行词是motorcycle，从句中缺少宾语，且此处有范围，特指＂那辆摩托车＂，故应用which引导定语从句。

第七处：borrow改为borrowed。last week是表示过去的时间状语，borrow应使用一般过去式borrowed。

第八处：most改为more。由than可知为比较级形式，此处表示＂更有用＂，故将most改为more。

第九处：去掉because后面的of。they are old是句子，去掉because后面的of，because引导原因状语从句。

第十处：useful改为useless。句意：我们应该使用东西直到它们没有用处（useless）为止。