Question

【题目】（三）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，针对校园内一些不文明现象，你班开展了主题活动，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学参与活动的全过程。

注意：1. 词数不少于60；

2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently, I noticed something unpleasent in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Recently, I noticed something unpleasent in our school. Some students littered freely while cleaners took pains to sweep the floor. To fight such bad bahaviors, our calss held a meeting themed ―To care about our environment, start from

ourselves. We discussed heatedly before we agreed on one solution. From the next day on, we were split into groups to collect rubbish every morning before class. Our deed got a thumb up from our teacher. He said we served as an example for the students to help keep the school clean. We also felt it meaningful to shoulder our responsibility for the environment around us.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是一篇图片作文。图画作文写作的时候注意以下几点：1、仔细审图并且注意有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简洁明了，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如To fight such bad bahaviors, our calss held a meeting themed用到了不定式。It作形式主语的句子We also felt it meaningful to shoulder our responsibility for the environment around us.