Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是李华，是Writing.Com的会员，近日收到如下邮件，邀请你尝试成为付费会员并上传作品。请结合邮件给予回复，解释你之前未上传作品的原因，并提出建议。

Hello, Li Hua! We noticed you’ve never tried a Writing.Com paid membership or upload any writing, so we’re offering you a discount to give it a go… A BIG discount: Take 50% off any paid membership of $19.95 or more. Visit our shop: http://Writing.Com/main/shop/cat/Memberships

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have received your email which offers me a big discount.______________________________

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have received your email which offers me a big discount. I am writing have to thank you for your kind offer. In the last years you have offered me a lot of help but I have never tried a Writing.Com paid membership, for which I feel really sorry. I never tried because I am not good at operating computers and don’t know how to pay to get your membership. I think the following suggestions may be of some help to you.

First, writings on your website need to be updated frequently for I find some articles are kind of old. Next, you should show your users how to be a membership clearly. Finally, I really hope for a bigger discount.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】 略