Question

【题目】【2016年襄阳五中英语5月模拟考试】假定你是李华，本已约好与Kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影《捉妖记》(Monster Hunt)。但你临时有事，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：

1. 临时有事要做。

2. 具体更改的见面时间、地点。

3. 此事已告知谁。

4. 见字告知。

注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头结尾已给。

Answer 1

【答案】

April 8

Hi Kelvin, I am going to tell you that I have something important to attend this evening, so I can’t go to see the movie, Monster Hunt, with you this evening. And I have to change it to another place, the Wanda Cinema. We will meet together at 7:00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening. I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball. If this change is not convenient to you, it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，本已约好与Kelvin今天(4月8日)晚上一起看电影《捉妖记》(Monster Hunt)。但你临时有事，他打篮球未回，故给他写留言条。要点如下：1. 临时有事要做。2. 具体更改的见面时间、地点。3. 此事已告知谁。4. 见字告知。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头结尾已给。

【亮点说明】I am going to tell you that I have something important to attend this evening, so I can’t go to see the movie, Monster Hunt, with you this evening.宾语从句和并列句完美结合；I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball.句中运用时间状语从句；If this change is not convenient to you, it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.条件状语从句和目的状语从句在同一句中出现，恰到好处。