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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job, she has to do most of the . She is a great mother. Both Dad I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then wentshopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes I cooked were Mom’s . At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and .

【解析】

【1】句意：妈妈有一个全职工作，但是她不得不做多数的家务。此处表示转折关系，故把so改为but。

【2】housework是不可数名词，故把houseworks改为housework。

【3】or→and固定搭配：both…and…两个都……，故把or改为nd。

【4】句意：在母亲节的早上我们起床很早。此处用一般过去时态，故把get改为got。

【5】固定词组：go shopping 去购物。故去掉on。

【6】句意：在爸爸手里。故把her改为his。

【7】句意：我在厨房里做饭。此处特指在厨房里，故在in和kitchen之间加the。

【8】此处考查引导定语从句的关系代词。句意：我做的菜是妈妈最喜欢的。the dishes作先行词，指物，定语从句缺少引导词，从句缺少宾语，可知引导词在定语从句中作宾语，故把what改为that/which(或去掉what)。

【9】“favorite”本身就是“最喜欢”，故把favoritest改为favorite。

【10】句意：妈妈既感激又感动。故把moving改为moved。

【归纳拓展】

表示情感的现在分词和过去分词

surprising令人惊讶的，surprised感到惊讶；

frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕；

moving令人感动的， moved 感动；

exciting 令人兴奋的，excited 感到兴奋；

boring令人厌烦的， bored感到厌烦；

annoying令人烦恼的，annoyed感到烦恼的。现在分词的主语通常指事物；过去分词的主语通常指人。