Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter给你发来一封电子邮件，信中讲述他和同学发生了冲突，心情很不好。请你写一封邮件对他进行劝告。内容必须包含以下三个方面：

1. 介绍和同学产生冲突的不良影响。

2. 分析发生冲突的主要原因。

3. 谈谈应如何处理好同学们之间的关系。

注意：1. 词数：100词左右；

2．文章的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad

mood._______________________________________________________________________

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I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad mood. Now I want to say something about it.

Classmate conflicts often result from different attitudes towards some issues. If we fail to deal with these conflicts properly, they can affect our mood and even lead to serious results.

Then what should we do to avoid these conflicts? In my opinion, when this situation arises, we should keep a cool head and put ourselves in others’ shoes rather than get annoyed and lose temper. What’s more, learning the art of compromise can contribute a lot to a good relationship. I think you may try communicating with your classmate to clear up your misunderstanding and you may feel good.

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用，如：Mr或Mrs等等。如果开头已给出的话，则需要将重点放在正文上。书写正文的时候一定要注意：不要遗漏文中给出的要点。需要先将文中的内容表述清楚，语句要通顺流畅。尽可能地避免出现语法错误，做到文中语意清楚，简单明了。根据文章内容可适当增加一些细节，以使表达更加顺畅。写作前还要根据内容判断确定时态和人称。尽可能地得体地使用所学词汇和句型。如能使用一些高级词汇、常用的短语和高级句式，则会给文章增添色彩，提高作文的档次。恰当使用一些连词和插入语，可以使文章表达更加自然、流畅。