Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

What is the most valuable thing in the world? Although the answer many vary from person to person, but as for me, reading books is most valuable than anything else. As old saying goes, “To open a book is always helpful. ”

First, books are our teachers. They introduce different kind of knowledge to us, include science and literature. Books are our friends either. With the valuable experience in them, books often helps us out when we meet difficulties. By increasing our knowledge and enlarge our experience, books lead us down the road to succeed. Therefore, to read more books is the best policy for we young students.

Answer 1

【答案】

What is the most valuable thing in the world? Although the answer many vary from person to person, but as for me, reading books is valuable than anything else. As old saying goes, “To open a book is always helpful. ”

First, books are our teachers. They introduce different of knowledge to us, science and literature. Books are our friends . With the valuable experience in them, books often us out when we meet difficulties. By increasing our knowledge and our experience, books lead us down the road to . Therefore, to read more books is the best policy for young students.

【解析】

【语篇解读】本文为说明文。讲述的是阅读是世界上最有价值的事，书籍是我们的良师益友。

第一处：第二句话中的but去掉。考查连词。although与but不可同时使用，故去掉but。

第二处：第二句话中的most改为more。考查形容词的比较级。根据句中的than anything else可知此处应该用比较级more valuable。

第三处：第三句话中的old前加the或an。考查冠词。句意：正如俗话所说，“开卷有益。”saying为可数名词，其单数前应用定冠词the或不定冠词an。

第四处：第二段第二句话中的kind改为kinds。考查名词。句意：它们使我们接触了不同种类的知识，包括科学和文学。根据句意可知此处kind应该用复数形式。

第五处：第二段第二句话中的include改为including。考查介词。根据句意可知此处应该用介词including在名词前用来举例。

第六处：第二段第三句话中的either改为too。考查副词。either用于否定句中表示“也”，此句为肯定句的末尾，应该用too。

第七处：第二段第四句话中的helps改为help。考查主谓一致。句子主语为books，谓语动词应该用动词原形help。

第八处：第二段第五句话中的enlarge改为enlarging。考查非谓语动词。句意：通过增加我们的知识和扩大我们的经验，书籍引领我们通向成功。根据句意可知此处and并列increasing和enlarging构成by doing结构作方式状语，故改为enlarging。

第九处：第二段第五句话中的succeed改为success。考查名词。根据句意和句子结构可知此处应该用名词success作介词to的宾语。

第十处：最后一句话中的we改成us。考查代词。介词for后应该用宾格us。