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【题目】短文改错

My parents always tell me that I should help other when they are in need. And I do which I am told to do. It was Sunday afternoon. Before I was walking to the park, I sudden saw a boy fall off his bike. I hurried to him and helped him up. Since one of his legs were badly hurt, the boy could not stand up for himself. I took him to a nearby hospital at once so that the boy got treat immediately. Then I telephoned his parents and told them about the whole story. They thank me again and again. It was dark and I said goodbye to them. Even though I couldn’t go to the park, but I felt very happy.

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这是一篇记叙文。本文主要讲述了一个星期天下午，我看到一个男孩从自行车上摔下来，我帮助他并把他送到了医院，最后得到小男孩父母感谢的故事。

考查代词。句意：我父母总是告诉我，当别人需要帮助时，我应该帮助他们。other意为“其他的”后面应跟名词复数。others意为“其他人”。分析句子可知，应把other改为others。

考查宾语从句。分析句子可知，what引导了一个宾语从句，作第二个动词do的宾语。故把which 改为what。

考查冠词。句意：那是一个星期天下午。分析句子可知，a Sunday afternoon意为“一个星期天下午”，表示泛指。故在Sunday前加a。

考查状语从句。句意：当我走到公园时，我突然看到一个男孩从自行车上摔下来。when表示“当……时候”，且when常和be doing连用，表示“这时候（突然）”。分析句子可知，应是作者在公园时发生的故事，而不是之前。故把before改为when。

考查副词。句意：我突然看到一个男孩从自行车上摔下来。分析句子可知，suddenly修饰动词saw。修饰动词用副词。故把sudden改为suddenly。

考查谓语动词。句意：由于他的一条腿受了重伤，这个男孩无法自己站起来。分析句子可知，此句的主语是one of his legs，谓语动词应用第三人称单数。故把were改为was。

考查介词。by oneself固定搭配，意为“靠自己”；for oneself意为“为自己”。分析句子可知，这个男孩无法自己站起来。故把for改为by。

考查名词。treat是动词，treatment是其名词形式。分析句子可知，我立刻把他送到附近的医院，让他立刻得到治疗。got后应跟名词。故把treat改为treatment。

考查时态。分析句子可知，此句是由and并列的两个谓语动词，故thank应跟telephoned的时态保持一致。分析文章可知，这是一件发生在过去的事。故把thank改为thanked。

考查连词。分析句子可知，but和even though不可连用。故去掉but。