Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was the International Women’s Day. Li Hua had a good idea and tells his father that he was going to do everything to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, that was always done by his mother. Li Hua cleaned the house completely while his father did some shop. Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup but some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full with flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid them behind the door and waited the mother in order to give her a surprise. When his mother came back and saw the delicious food, she felt happily.

Answer 1

【答案】

It was International Women’s Day. Li Hua had a good idea and his father that he was going to do to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, was always done by his mother. Li Hua cleaned the house completely while his father did some . Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup some other delicious dishes. Li Hua laid the table and set a vase 或 flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid behind the door and waited the mother in order to give her a surprise. When his mother came back and saw the delicious food, she felt .

【解析】

第一处：the去掉 考查冠词。节日前不加冠词，故the去掉。

第二处：tells→told 考查动词时态。并列句前后时态一致，and前半句是过去时，故后半句应是过去时，动词用过去式，故tells改成told。

第三处：everything→something 考查代词。句意：李华有一个好主意，并告诉他的父亲，他将做一些事来庆祝它。故everything改成something。

第四处：that→which 考查引导词。先行词是housework，定语从句的引导词在从句中作主语，故用which。故that改成which。

第五处：shop→shopping 考查动词固定搭配。do some shopping购物，故shop改成shopping。

第六处：but→and 考查连词。此处是顺承关系，而不是转折关系，故but改成and。句意：然后他们做了一顿美味的饭菜，煮鱼、猪肉、鸡肉、汤和一些其他美味的菜肴。

第七处：full→filled或with→of 考查动词固定搭配。full of 充满……，filled with充满……，故full改成filled或with改成of。句意：李华铺了桌子，把一个放满花的花瓶放在桌子中央。

第八处：them→themselves 考查代词。此处themselves作主语they的同位语，是反身代词，表示＂他们自己＂，故them改成themselves。

第九处：waited后加for 考查介词。wait 是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语。wait for等待，为固定表达，故waited后加for。

第十处：happily→happy 考查形容词。此处用于形容妈妈感觉很开心，用形容词，故happily改成happy。