Question

【题目】（二十五）

请根据下列提示以 “Helping Others Can Help you” 为题写一篇参加志愿者活动给我们带来的益处的英语短文。

1. 获得生活经验和技能；

2. 结交有趣的朋友；

3. 回报社会，消除理解障碍；

4. 你自己的看法。

注意：120词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。

Helping Others Can Help you

Volunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. But did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too?

Answer 1

【答案】

Helping Others Can Help you

Volunteering has a meaningful, positive effect on your community. But did you know that it can have many benefits for you, too?

To begin with, volunteering enables you to gain some valuable life experience as well as work skills, which I think lays a solid foundation for your future study or career. In the meantime, by volunteering, you can make friends with people from all walks of life, from whom you can obtain useful knowledge that can’t be learnt at school. In addition, volunteering provides you with a good opportunity to give back to society and break down barriers of understanding, thus a harmonious society can be created.

As far as I’m concerned, volunteering is a good way for us to build self-esteem and self-confidence, too. Also, when offering others help, we ourselves will have a sense of satisfaction. Therefore, volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语To begin with,首先；make friends with交朋友；In addition,此外；give back返回；To begin with, volunteering enables you to gain some valuable life experience as well as work skills, which I think lays a solid foundation for your future study or career这个句子中which引导非限制性定语从句；In the meantime, by volunteering, you can make friends with people from all walks of life, from whom you can obtain useful knowledge that can’t be learnt at school.这个句子运用到介词+关系代词引导的定语从句；Therefore, volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves这个句子运用到be of+名词，相当于be+adj；