Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining hardly.1 was seating in my classroom by myself. ＂We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You’ll say goodbye to your new classmates.＂ That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears.

Although I had studied at school for only two months, I real loved everything there. What’s more, the teaching conditions here are many better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.

Answer 1

【答案】

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining .I was in my classroom by myself.

＂We shall soon leave Beijing and returnto Sichuan. You’ll say goodbye to your new classmates.＂ my father told me the other day sounded once again my ears.

Although I had studied at school for only two months, I loved everything there. What’s more, the teaching conditions here are better than those in Sichuan. As a child was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. , after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things l had never seen.

【解析】

【文章大意】文章介绍作者从四川到北京上学，学到很多东西，在即将离开北京回家的时候，感到不舍和难过。

第一处：雨下得很大。用hard（副词：猛力地; 严重地）。hardly几乎不。故hardly改为hard。

第二处：seat是及物动词，宾语可以是sb./oneself，seat和sb是动宾关系。也可以用be seated就坐。sit是不及物动词，I和sit是主动关系。故seating改为sitting或seated。

第三处：return＂归还＂和back含义重复。故return back 去掉back。

第四处：＂____my father told me＂是主语从句，缺少主语，指物，用what引导主语从句。故That my father中的That改为What。

第五处：爸爸的话在作者的耳朵里面响起。介词用in。故on my ears中on改为in。

第六处：根据上下文语境这里特指的是作者在北京的学校，用定冠词。故at school改为at the school。

第七处：修饰动词love用副词。故real改为really。

第八处：修饰形容词比较级用副词much。many不能修饰形容词比较级。故many 改为much。

第九处：…was born in Sichuan是定语从句，先行词是a child，指人，而且定语从句缺少主语，用关系代词who或that。故which改为who或that。

第十处：上文＂I knew almost nothing about the world outside.＂和下文的＂I saw so many things l had never seen.＂是转折关系。故Therefore 改为However。