假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Early one morning in April, 2014, it was raining hardly.1 was seating in my classroom by myself. ＂We shall soon leave Beijing and return back to Sichuan. You’ll say goodbye to your new classmates.＂ That my father told me the other day sounded once again on my ears.

Although I had studied at school for only two months, I real loved everything there. What’s more, the teaching conditions here are many better than those in Sichuan. As a child which was born in Sichuan, I knew almost nothing about the world outside. Therefore, after I came to Beijing, I saw so many things I had never seen.

A．稀释浓硫酸时，将浓硫酸沿着量筒壁慢慢的注入盛有水的量筒中，并不断搅拌

B．浓硫酸具有氧化性，稀硫酸无氧化性

C．浓硫酸不慎沾到皮肤上，应立即用布拭去，再用大量水冲洗

D．浓硫酸与铜的反应中，被氧化和被还原物质的物质的量之比为1∶2

A.sacrifice

B.devotion

C.duty

D.business

【1】含有中华龙鸟化石的页岩属于

A．沉积岩 B．变质岩 C．侵入岩 D．喷出岩

【1】根据化石推断，中华龙鸟最可能的生存环境是

A．火山频发的高原山地

B．温暖湿润的湖泊附近

C．风沙肆虐的沉积盆地

D．冰川广布的高寒荒漠

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2.结合上述信息，简要阐述坚持梦想的重要性；

3.谈谈你的梦想 ，并分析实现梦想的必要要素（不少于两点）。

【写怍要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称：

3.不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba

HIGHLIGHTS

Includes bonus discount coupons

Book online & skip the queue

16 themed zones

14 talks and animal feeds

Great fun for the whole family

One of the most popular attractions on the Sunshine Coast for many years, UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba is Queensland’s largest aquarium and oceanarium with one of the hugest and most diverse arrays of marine life - both above and under the water - in Australia!

With a brand-new, newly renovated shark exhibit to go along with the eleven other amazing zones that each highlight a different aspect of the aquatic kingdom.

PURCHASE

Opening Times

Open daily from 9am to 5pm, Anzac Day from 1.30pm to 5.30pm and closed Christmas Day. Last admissions are 1 hour prior to closing time.

How to get to UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba

Walk

Just a 2-minute walk from the beach on the southern end of Mooloolaba Esplanade.

Car

If you are coming from Brisbane simply follow the Bruce Highway north and take the Moooloolaba exit after the Ettamogah Pub, then simply follow the signs to Mooloolaba.

If you are coming from Gympie follow the Bruce Highway south and exit at the Maroochydore exit. Follow the signs onto the Sunshine Motorway. Exit at the Mooloolaba exit and follow the brown signs to UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba.

Bus

Sunbus operates a regular bus service from Noosa to Caloundra. Contact Sunbus on 13 12 30 for more information.

Additional Information

Free parking is available at UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba.

UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba is completely undercover so even if it is raining you can still have a fantastic time!

【1】 What does the underlined word “arrays” in paragraph 2 probably mean?

A. Displays.B. Advantages. C. Challenges. D. Programs.

【2】 How much will a couple with a child aged 2 if they want to visit UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba ?

A. ＄ 54.90. B. ＄ 68.40.C. ＄ 83.30.D. ＄ 69.80.

【3】 Which of the following ways is proper to visit UnderWater World SEA LIFE Mooloolaba by car?

A. Brisbane→the Moooloolaba exit→Bruce Highway→Mooloolaba

B. Bruce Highway→the Moooloolaba exit→the Ettamogah Pub→Mooloolaba

C. Brisbane→the Moooloolaba exit→Mooloolaba→the Ettamogah Pub

D. Brisbane→Bruce Highway→the Ettamogah Pub→Mooloolaba

【1】下图中所示地理现象的成因与上图所示实验原理相同的是（ ）

A．① B．② C．③ D．④

【2】关于上题图中现象的叙述，不正确的是（ ）

A．①图所示原理对地表形态塑造作用明显

B．②图所示天气系统过境时会造成大范围的降温

C．③图反映的是白天的情形

D．④图所示原理是澳大利亚东北部热带雨林气候的重要成因之一

【1】与甲图的形成机理一样的是下列哪种地貌（ ）

A．石笋、钟乳石 B．黄土高原千沟万壑

C．云南路南石林 D．长江三峡

【2】在地壳物质循环简图中，能反映乙图岩石形成过程的是（ ）

A．① B．② C．③ D．④

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!

My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.

【1】

A. 甲、乙两处可能都为暖流 B. 甲、乙两处一定位于大陆西岸

C. 赤道不可能从甲乙之间穿过 D. 甲乙流向主要受盛行风的影响

【2】

A. 甲处洋流对沿岸具有增温增湿作用

B. 该图的中心部分可能形成世界级的大渔场

C. 乘海轮自北向南由甲至乙一路顺流

D. 如果乙处海域石油泄露，则甲处最易受影响