Question

【题目】Dear Ms. Smith,

I appreciate your help very much. On the first day of camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and encouraged to me to join in activities. As the result, I gradually got to know the other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting into a college. I am proud of it. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】of 后面加the

【2】myself改成 me

【3】specially 改成special

【4】去掉to

【5】the 改成 a

【6】because 后加of

【7】go 改成went

【8】but 改成 and

【9】admitting改成admitted

【10】becoming 改成become

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题

【1】of 后面加the；第二句On the first day of camp中camp在文中是一种特指，因此前面要加上定冠词the。故要在of 后面加the

【2】myself改成 me；第二句后部分you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.中came up to到达，to是介词，后接名词的宾格形式。myself是反身代词，而“我”的宾格形式是me。故把myself改成 me。

【3】specially 改成special；第三句you always gave me specially attention中，specially adv.特别地； 专门地； 特意地； 格外地。special adj.特殊的； 专门的； 专用的。这里修饰attention注意，名词，要用副词形式。故把specially 改成special。

【4】去掉to；第三句encouraged to me to join in activities中，encourage鼓励，鼓舞，是及物动词，encourage sb鼓励某人，不需要介词。故要去掉to

【5】the 改成 a；第四句As the result中，固定搭配是as a result，因此，所以。故要把the 改成 a。

【6】because 后加of；第五句Because the help you gave me that summer中，the help you gave me that summer是一个名词短语，因此前面要使用介词，而Because of是介词短语，表示“因为，由于”。故because 后加of

【7】go 改成went；第六句I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person中，前面使用过去式gained，因此主从句时态要一致，这里也应该是过去式，故go 改成went。

【8】but 改成 and；第七句My grades improved. I became very active but made new friends.中，我成绩提高，变得积极和交到新朋友，是并列而不是转折关系。故要把but 改成 and。

【9】admitting改成admitted；第八句Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting into a college.中，admit允许； 确认；而这里是被允许，故要用被动时态。故要把admitting改成admitted。

【10】becoming 改成become；最后一句I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 中，help的用法是help sb (to)do sth，帮助某人做某事。故要把becoming 改成become。