Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Most of the Chinese people think the family with one child is more better than the one with more than one child. For a thing, they want to build a successful career but have few time to bring up more than one child; for other thing, raise only one child they can afford better education for him. But others think this is better to have a big family. They think more children they raise, the better their life will be when they grow old. In my opinions, it's enough for a family to have one child, or population expansion will contribute to a series of problem.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 去掉more

 For a→One

 few →little

 other→another

 raise→raising

 this→it

 more前加the

 opinions→opinion

 or→and

 problem→problems

【解析】

 better本身已经是比较级，不需要再用more.

 固定短语。For one thing, for another 一方面,另一方面

 time是不可数名词，用little修饰。

 固定短语。For one thing, for another 一方面,另一方面

 raise与they构成主动关系，使用现在分词做状语。

 it指代上文提及的同一事物或者同一个事情。

 固定句型the 比较级…，the 比较级…越…越…

 固定词组in one’s opinion

 上下文存在着并列的关系，而不是转折的关系。

 一系列的问题，那么问题要用复数形式。