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假如你是李越,你的两位朋友Tom和Peter几天前发生了争吵。9月12日是Peter的生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,因此特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:

礼物选择;

你的理由;

其他和解建议;

注意:1. 词数100-120;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.

 

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Li Yue

 

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go on an outing by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well. Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner or going shopping together. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Yue

【解析】

试题分析:考查提纲类书面表达:这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语consider doing 考虑做某事;As far as I know据我所知;build up增强;In the meanwhile与此同时;Apart from除了;If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him这个句子中运用到虚拟语气;In the meanwhile, you can often go on an outing by bike together, which is helpful in rebuilding your friendship.这个句子which引导一个非限制性定语从句;Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally friendly means of transport.这个句子运用到动名词做主语;No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important.这个句子中no matter 引导让步状语从句和动名词做主语;

考点: 提纲类作文

 

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