Question

14．英国学生Mary计划来海大留学，为了提前适应中国环境，希望在暑假期间找一名高中生学习汉语及中国文化．你高考即将结束，正好有时间可以帮助她，所以决定给她写封E-mail．
注意：1．表达应包括以上要点；
2．可以适当增加细节，表达要连贯；
3．词数120-150．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给Mary写封E-mail．写作时以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主要时态．
重点词汇：so as to （以便，以至于）；adapt to （适应）；be good at（擅长于）；have difficulty in doing （作某事有困难）；show sb around （带某人参观）；look forward to （期待，盼望）．
高分句型：1．I've learned from the Internet①that you want to have a Chinese Senior High student teach you some Chinese as well as Learning about Chinese culture ②so as to make yourself easier to adapt to the new environment in China③before you begin to study in China．
                ①that引导一个宾语从句；②不定式短语表示目的；③before引导一个时间状语从句．
                 2．Most suitably，①when you come to China，I will just have had my college entrance exam，②which will give me plenty of time to teach you Chinese．
                 ①when引导一个时间状语从句；②which引导一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代上一句提到的事情．

解答 Dear Mary，
I've learned from the Internet that you want to have a Chinese Senior High student teach you some Chinese as well as Learning about Chinese culture so as to make yourself easier to adapt to the new  environment in China before you begin to study in China（高分句型一）．I'like to be the one to help you．Now let me introduce myself and my plan to help you．I'am Li Hua，a Senior 3 Student from a Qingdao middle school．I'am good at Chinese and English，so I think we won't have difficulty in communicating with each other in English．Most suitably，when you come to China，I will just have had my college entrance exam，which will give me plenty of time to teach you Chinese （高分句型二）．I'll  let you learn Chinese culture by showing you around my hometown and making friends with my classmates．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否覆盖了所给要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，使得上下文意思连贯，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，使文章浅显易懂，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．