Question

书面表达 （满分30分）

在许多地方，家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一。请根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并谈谈你对此事的看法。

赞成	反对
节约时间； 安全； 增加父母与孩子交流的机会。	造成交通堵塞； 增加家长负担； 使学生依赖家长。

注意：词数不少于100.

参考词汇：

In many places, it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In many places, it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.

Some people think driving children to school can save their valuable time, in which way the children can get enough sleep. Besides, it is comfortable and safe for children. Also, it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children.

However, others hold different opinions. They think it may result in traffic jams. And it will lay a burden on parents. In addition, children may become too dependent on their children.

As far as I’m concerned, if it is convenient, of course, parents can drive children to school sometimes. But parents should keep it in mind that it’s better for children to be independent.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象，给出了大部分要点，就是对这个现象的不同观点，要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学认为赞成的观点，然后是反对的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。

考点：考查正反方观点作文写作

点评：本文属于正反方观点作文，但是要点给出的比较全，只需要考生表达清楚，还有自己的观点。在写作的时候要适合合适的连接词来连接各要点，使他们成为整体。要选择高级的词汇和句型，让文章有变化，有层次。