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第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a teenager, I remember Dad get home lately every night. He already
had a great work and loved by his students. He took years to finish
that he wanted. And now, decades later, I see myself for him. I go to work
throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours
on Sunday so I can finish my degree that I started twenty years ago. It took
me the long time to figure out that what I wanted. I want to do for student
what my father did for students. In my opinion, my father is my real hero.


【小题1】1.get-getting
【小题2】lately-late
【小题3】Loved---was loved
【小题4】that—what
【小题5】for---in
【小题6】came-come
【小题7】the-a
【小题8】that-what
【小题9】student-students 

解析通常情况下,改错可分3步走。
第一步:确定时态,一般为现在或过去式或两者交叉使用焦点集中在动词身上,注意动词的形式变化,如谓语与非谓语。在本题中,文章开篇说自己的事用现在时,转而叙述他人的事(通常已发生,用过去式),转入自己的事。
第二步:断句,以句子为单位进行阅读,分析句子结构,提炼出句子主干,枝叶很可能设置障碍,通常为无故多词,无故少词,用错词(错词一般在该词词性范围内进行替换)注意句子与句子之间的衔接,是转折,并列还是因果等。
第三步:通读全文,掌握大意,进行复查。(了解改错题规律,一般为同一词性的相互转化)
【小题1】显然两个动词不能并存于一个单句中,remember 后接动词ing,get-getting 动词之间转换
【小题2】 lately表示近来,最近之意 --- late表示很晚,迟到,最后等之意副词之间转换
【小题3】无故少词:He already had a great work and loved by his students 显然,by在此处是被动语态的标志,故在loved 前加was
【小题4】 that引导名词性从句无实际意义。What在此处引导宾语从句。
【小题5】可知,我在他身上看到了自己应用in,介词之间转换
【小题6】叙述过去的事,动词应用过去式
【小题7】the-a (a long time)一段很长时间冠词之间转换
【小题8】that引导名词性从句无实际意义,What在此处引导宾语从句。
【小题9】显然可知,名词应为复数形式。
第三步:
考点:句子多词少词,用错词。
点评:解答此类题,需要了解解题规律,结合上述方法,平时复习时多加练习,多思考,多总结,平时也应注重单词的归类练习,这样才能顺利过关。

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