Question

19．假如你是我市一名高三学生李华，你打算报考一所外语学院．你在网络上看到上海外国语学院的招生信息（admission information），并对此非常感兴趣．根据招生要求，你需要用英语撰写一份个人申请报告，内容应包括：
    1．记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果；
    2．说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想等．
注意：1．词数：不少于120；开头与结尾已经给出，不计人总词数．
    2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to study in your university．I read about the admission information （招生信息）while surfing the net the other day．I'm really interested in it．
On the one hand，I'm an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates．On the other hand，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English．I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies．Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther．King（马丁路德金），President Bush（布什总统） and so on，are also my favorite．What's more，I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances．
As we all know，English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people，so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university．I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote宣传 cultural communication 文化交流between China and the world．
 
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们向上海外国语学院写一份个人申请报告，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：记述自己的个性特长及取得的成果，说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想．首先总体介绍自己特长，然后介绍取得的成果，最后说明进入大学后的努力方向及设想．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为自己的个性特长及取得的成果．第二部分为进入大学后的努力方向及设想．
重点短语与句型：
apply to  申请
On the one hand…On the other hand…一方面…另一方面
 get on well with 与…相处的好
What's more而且，此外
intend to major in English  打算主修英语
be admitted into 被录取
Speeches （delivered by famous people ）are also my favorite著名人物发表的演讲也是我的最爱．此句为过去分词作后置定语．
I once won the first prize for English speech contest （held in our city ）此句也是过去分词作后置定语．
I want to have a job （which is related to languages ）in the future 此句为定语从句．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to study in your university． I read about the admission information （招生信息）while surfing the net the other day．I'm really interested in it．
On the one hand，I'm an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates．On the other hand，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English．I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies．Speeches delivered by famous people like Martin Luther．King（马丁路德金），President Bush（布什总统） and so on，are also my favorite．（介绍自己的个性特长）What's more，I once won the first prize for English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellence performances．（取得的成果）
As we all know，English is a universal language and I like to communicate with different people，so I intend to major in English if I am admitted into your university．I want to have a job related to languages in the future and I believe I can help promote宣传 cultural communication 文化交流between China and the world．（进入大学后的努力方向及设想）I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．