Question

20．五、基础写作 
写作内容
目前，越来越多的青少年参加各类电视节目的才艺表演（talent shows）．对此，中学生的看法各有不同．

赞同	不赞同
展示才艺，增加社会经验； 增强自信； 有利于学生全面（overall adj．）发展．	模仿多，没有自己的风格； 沉迷于"明星梦"，无心学习； 有上当受骗的危险．

写作要求
必须用5个句子表达全部的内容；
将5个句子组成连贯的短文．
评分标准
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯．1．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇带有表格的作文题，通过表格内容可知不同人对talent shows有不同看法．写作时，先阐述两种人不同的观点，并列出每种观点的理由．最后发表自己的看法．
高级词汇、短语和高分句型：
an increasing number of  越来越多
take part in 参加
contribute to 对…贡献
imitate 模仿
rather than 而不是
put heart and soul into全身心投入
高分句型：①Some think it is a stage to show…，contributing much to their…
   contributing to 现在分词做状语  
②other students hold the different idea that…
that 引导一个同位语从句，为idea 的内容，

解答 At present，an increasing number of teenagers are taking part in TV talent shows，about which students‘opinions are divided．（赞同观点）①Some think that it is a stage to show their talents of art，contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence．What's more，（理由）it's good for their overall development．
      However，（不赞同观点） ②other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original．Besides，（列举理由） some are such"star dream"followers that they can't put their heart and soul into their study，thus affecting their study badly．
    （自己的观点） In my opinion，important as study is，it's not the only thing we can do．It's preferable to explore our abilities in other areas besides study．

点评 一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．