Question

【题目】假定你是李华，得知你的英国留学生朋友Peter在CCTV举办的《中国诗词大会》(The Chines Poetry Competition)决赛中失利。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 给予安慰和鼓励；

2. 愿意提供帮助。

注意：1. 词数80-100词；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m sorry to know that you were knocked out in the finals of the Chinese Poetry Competition last week. I’m writing to express my sincere concern for you.

I understand how you are feeling. You made careful preparations in advance and tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. As a saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” As a matter of fact, you can learn a valuable lesson from this experience. I do hope that you won’t lose heart and will keep on learning Chinese. There are many opportunities to show your talent in the future. If you keep on trying, you are sure to win in the next competition.

Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文为提纲类应用文写作。

本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给英国留学生朋友Peter写封邮件。写作背景： Peter在CCTV举办的《中国诗词大会》决赛中失利。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1.给予安慰和鼓励； 2.愿意提供帮助。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要富有变化。