Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你们学校即将举行英语戏剧节活动，你们班正为此排练节目A Midsummer Night’s Dream，遇到一些困难，请你给外教 Mr. Jones写一封电子邮件寻求他的指导和帮助，要点如下：

1. 排练时间、地点;

2. 求助内容。

注意:1. 字数100字左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:排练 rehearsal

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Jones,

I’m Li Hua. As you know, our school is organizing an English Drama Festival, for which our class is preparing a program named Midsummer Night’s Dream. However, we have encountered some difficulties, so I ask for your guidance and help.

First of all, our rehearsal is set on the afternoon of this Saturday in the school hall. Therefore I sincerely invite you to guide us in person. Originating from Shakespeare’s famous play, our program needs to truly reflect its content, but we don’t know much about Middle English which Shakespeare used in his work. That’s why we want you to give some guidance with your rich knowledge reserves and cultural background.

We really need your help. Please reply as soon as possible.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，就学校英语戏剧节活动排练节目事宜向外教寻求指导和帮助。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 表达邮件目的

2. 排练节目相关

1）排练时间、地点

2）求助具体内容

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

rehearsal；English Drama Festival；program；difficulty；guidance；ask for；look forward to；invitation

第三步：连词成句

1. Our school is about to hold an activity of English Drama Festival.

2. Our class is having a rehearsal but something is wrong with the program.

3. So I’m writing to ask for your guidance about it.

4. I wonder when and where we shall have the rehearsal together.

5. And I want your opinions about how we can deal with the present problems.

6. Looking forward to your reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改