Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Everyone have a dream. We are on the way to achieving it whether the way is smooth or tough. As Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three year, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got more closer to my dream. Anxiety and pressure do discourage from me at times and with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter what challenging it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said, “Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】1 have—has

2 Senior前加a

3 year—years

4 that I have—what I have

5got more closer—

more改成much

6 discourage from 去掉from

7 at times后面的and—but

8 has—is

9 what—how

10 said—says

【解析】1．此处Everyone是不定代词，做主语，后面的谓语动词用单数形式，故把have---has。

2．加a．题干中student是可数名词，表示作为一名高三的学生，表示泛指，要用不定冠词。

3.句意：在过去的三年里。此处用名词复数，故把year---years。

4．that 改为what．题干中I have learnt from my teachers是一个句子，位于介词with的后面，是一个宾语从句．从句中learnt缺少宾语，要用连接代词。

5.此处closer是比较级，more不能修饰比较级，故把more---much。

6．去掉from．题干中discourage是及物动词，不用介词。故把from去掉。

7.句意：焦虑和压力有时会让我泄气，但在老师和同学的鼓励下，我想我会成功的。根据句意可知前后表示转折，故把and---but。

8．has 改为is．there be结构，表示某地有某物．故把has---is。

9．句意：不管它有多困难，我都会让它变成现实。how修饰形容词或副词，故把what---how。

10．said 改为says．谚语表示的是客观真理，要用一般现在时态。