Question

1．最近，某中学生英文报开设了"After-class activities"的栏目．请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动．
1．你参加的课外活动及给你带来的好处．（社团活动；体育运动；上网…）
2．为同学选择课外活动提出建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．稿件的开头以为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．注释：社团---club
After-school activities
Nowadays，after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给"After-class activities"栏目写一篇英文稿件，鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：参加的课外活动及带来的好处．（社团活动；体育运动；上网…）；为同学选择课外活动提出建议．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为作者参加的课外活动及带来的好处．第二部分为就选择课外活动提出建议．
重点短语与句型：
enrich  knowledge丰富知识
free…from 免于，摆脱
take part in 参加
高分句型一：Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good．此句用了which引导定语从句
高分句型二：Not only will they make your school life colorful，but alsothey can improve your learning．此句not only置句首，部分倒装．

解答 After-school activities
Nowadays，after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools．In our school，there are various kinds of activities，for example，arts and sports．We enjoy them very much．Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good．（高分句型一） Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge，they also free me from the heavy work of study．（作者参加的课外活动及带来的好处）
Here I have some suggestions．To students，you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you；to schools，they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework．Dear friends，please actively take part in after-class activities．Not only will they make your school life colorful，but alsothey can  improve your learning．（高分句型二）（就选择课外活动提出建议）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．