Question

8．假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Linda 想了解你的暑假计划．请根据下面的提示写封回信．
1．读书学习
2．帮助父母做家务
3．参加其他活动
注意：
1．词数在100左右；开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数．
2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯．
Dear Linda，
I'm extremely pleased to hear from you．Thank you for your concern about me．
My summer vocation is coming．Here are my vocation plans．                                    

Answer 1

分析 这是一封介绍暑假计划的书信．根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态以及一般将来时态表示自己的计划．内容包括：一读书学习；二帮助父母做家务；三参加其他活动；四希望了解对方的计划．
高分句型：
1．I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends．句子里because引导原因状语从句；as well as 表示"也包括"．
我永远不会停止对阅读的热爱，因为书籍是智慧的老师和好朋友．
2．Thirdly，being an active young person，I'll take part in other activities such as cleaning up streets or parks，helping the elderly and so on．句子里being an active young person是原因状语，be和主语I是主动关系； cleaning up streets or parks helping the elderly and so on是并列的二个宾语．
第三，作为一个积极活跃的年轻人，我还会参加其他的活动，例如清扫街道和公园；帮助老年人等等．

解答 Dear Linda，
I'm extremely pleased to hear from you．Thank you for your concern about me．
    My summer vocation is coming．Here are my vocation plans．Firstly，I plan to study hard and spend two hours reading every day．Reading is my favorite hobby．I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends．【高分句型一】（读书学习）Secondly，I'd like to help my parents to do some housework．As you know，as a busy Senior High student，I seldom help them with the housework．（帮助父母做家务）Thirdly，being an active young person，I'll take part in other activities such as cleaning up streets or parks，helping the elderly and so on．【高分句型二】（参加其他活动）
What you are going to do on your vocation？I'm looking forward to you letter．（希望了解对方的计划）
    Best Wishes．
Yours
LiMing

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提纲类作文题材涉及广泛，如人物介绍、地点介绍、新闻报道、生活话题及社会热门话题，试题设计真实性高，符合学生的认知水平，其中学校生活类题材占比例最大．体裁多种多样，包括应用文（书信、日记、通知、发言稿、寻物及招领启事等）、说明文、记叙文、议论文等，所以平时学习时要背诵此类经典例文．