Question

最近，你班即将举行以“Life in the future”为主题的英语讨论。请根据以下表格中的要点，写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你心目中未来的生活。

医学	癌症可被治愈
能源	新能源被开发利用，停止使用石油等燃料
旅行	更方便快捷的交通工具出现，人类可去太空旅行和度假
日常生活	机器人进入百姓家庭，可提供各种服务

 

With the development of science and technology,____________________________________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Life in the future

         With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will greatly differ from what it is today. It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future.

         A new cure for cancer is expected to be discovered and fuels such as coal, gas and petrol will not be used with new energy forms being developed. As new means of transportation are invented, it is possible for human beings to travel to outer space and go on holiday on other planets. Besides, robots are popular in our homes and do a lot of housework for us.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，话题是“Life in the future”，文章的要点都已经给出了。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】：本文中含有一些高级词汇，如differ from…不同于…:也有一些高级的句式结构，with new energy forms being developed.中的with复合结构。our life in the future will greatly differ from what it is today.中的what it is today的宾语从句。It is really interesting to imagine what our life will be like in the future.中的it作为形式主语。连词Besides等的使用也很合适

考点：考察提纲类短文