Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m one of your customer, I ordered a set of books on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t received it until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, the books were too poorly packed up that the cover of one book were torn. To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missed.

I’m sorry to have received such poorly service, and I believe I have every right ask you to deal with this problem. I hope you either return my money back or deliver a new set of books to me. Beside, I’d like to be informed of the process of your deal with my complaint.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】customer →customers

【2】received →receive

【3】too →so

【4】were →was

【5】missed →missing

【6】poorly →poor

【7】ask前加to

【8】去掉back

【9】Beside →Besides

【10】deal →dealing

【解析】

试题分析：作者网购了一套书，遭遇较差服务且书籍缺少，封面破损等情况。作者写信要求卖家解决问题。

【1】customer →customers.考查名词。此处是one of句型指“…之一”，其中名词要用复数。故customer →customers.

【2】received →receive.考查动词形式。句中有助动词didn’t后面要用动词原形，故received →receive.

【3】too →so.考查固定句型。句中包含so…that句型，表示“如此…以至于”。故too →so.

【4】were →was.考查主谓一致。主语是the cover of one book指书的封皮，是单数。动词与之一致也用单数，故were →was.

【5】missed →missing.考查形容词。missed“感到思念的”；missing“丢失的”。此处指一本书丢了，missing做宾补。故missed →missing.

【6】poorly →poor.考查形容词。此处修饰名词service用形容词，指“差的服务”，故poorly →poor.

【7】ask前加to.考查不定式。此处是不定式做定语，指要求解决问题的权利，故ask前加to.

【8】去掉back.考查词意。句中return指“归还”，后面加back与之重复，故去掉back.

【9】Beside →Besides.考查副词。Beside “在…旁边”表示方位；Besides“此外”表示递进，此处表示递进，故Beside →Besides.

【10】deal →dealing.考查非谓语动词。此处指你处理问题的进程，用于your后面，是动名词的复合结构，故deal →dealing.