Question

【题目】高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。请你依据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇英文演讲稿，并作为学生代表在班会课上发言。词数150左右。

烦恼	解决办法
外形不美	不必在意，关注内在美
朋友少，不被他人理解	多参加活动，多与别人交流
与父母有代沟，经常吵架	加强沟通，互相理解
学习成绩不好，压力大	？

注意：

1．开头已写好，不记入词数;

2．语言通顺，结构严谨。

参考词汇：内在美 inner beauty 除去 get rid of

Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely.

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That’s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First, some of us are upset about their body styles and looks. It’s unnecessary and it’s not important at all. We needn’t care about it. It is one’s inner beauty that matters. Second, some of us have fewer friends. I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good. We sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers or classmates. Faced with this, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, trying to remove the misunderstanding. Third, some of us often quarrel with our parents because of the generation gap between us. It is necessary for us to communicate with our parents after school, telling them what we think or what we want to do in the future. Last of all, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Actually we can encourage ourselves to work efficiently, full of determination.

That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】首先审题，请你依据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇英文演讲稿，并作为学生代表在班会课上发言。任务中给出的提示信息包含如下内容：外形不美，不必在意，关注内在美；朋友少，不被他人理解，多参加活动，多与别人交流；与父母有代沟，经常吵架，加强沟通，互相理解；学习成绩不好，压力大……抓住了这亮点，我们就抓住了文章的核心内容。其次选用正确的人称和时态，考虑用一般现在时，第一人称来写。然后写出单个句子，使用正确的连词，连句成段。具体来说，写这篇文章时，要注意: 要注意: 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: care about关心，open-minded思想开明的。还使用了宾语从句I think being open-minded and friendly will do you good.和定语从句Last of all, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。