假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处错误．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Yesterday I read an article about a eating competition to be holding next month．I'd like to have a try．I'm always hungry，and I'm a bigger eater．Sometimes I eat more than I want to，just to amaze my friends．Last week，I tell my friend Jeff I was so hungry that I could eat a whole large pizzas．Jeff said that was possible．I said，"If you buy it，and I'll eat it．"And I did!However，the harmful effects of overeating make I a little bit nervous．I never know what overeating can cause holes in one's stomach．So competitive eating might be my sport，but I think I'll check with my doctor before I sign up compete．

分析本文主要介绍作者总是感到饥饿，想参加一个吃的比赛．但过度饱食的有害后果使作者有点紧张，因此，在报名参加比赛之前想与医生协商．

解答 Yesterday I read an article about a eating competition to be holding next month．I'd like to have a try．I'm always hungry，and I'm a bigger eater．Sometimes I eat more than I want to，just to amaze my friends．Last week，I tell told my friend Jeff I was so hungry that I could eat a whole large pizzas．Jeff said that was possible．I said，"If you buy it，and I'll eat it．"And I did!However，the harmful effects of overeating make I a little bit nervous．I never know what overeating can cause holes in one's stomach．So competitive eating might be my sport，but I think I'll check with my doctor before I sign up∧compete．
详解：
1．a改为an 考查冠词．eating的读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
2．holding改为held 考查过去分词．competition与hold之间是动宾关系，要用动词不定式的被动形式．
3．bigger改为big 考查形容词．此处没有比较对象，用形容词原级．
4．tell改为told 考查动词时态．根据时间状语Last week，用一般过去时态．
5．pizzas改为pizza 考查名词．根据不定冠词a，要用单数形式．
6．possible改为impossible 考查形容词．根据句意：那是不可能的．用impossible．
7．去掉and 考查连词．在英语中，两个单句只要一个连词连接，已有if的情况下，and是多余的，要去掉．
8．I改为me 考查代词．make是动词，后接宾格代词．
9．what改为that 考查连词．宾语从句overeating can cause holes in one's stomach是完整的，用连词that．
10．compete前加to 考查动词不定式．此处动词不定式表示目的，作目的状语．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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