Question

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例用英语写一篇短文。

A good state of mind is the base of success.

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称；

⑤词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.

An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep,thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam.

It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam . A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep,thus making me very sleepy in class.这句话有with复合结构，so…that…句型，和现在分词做结果状语，是个有力的增分点，

Seeing this, my teacher came to my help.这句话也是现在分词做状语，It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam .这是强调句，A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal.这句话里面有表语从句， Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.这句话是有让步状语从句，和倒装句，总之，范围使用大量高中教材中出现的高级短语和句型，考生应该能做到学以致用。

考点：考查开放式作文