Question

【题目】第24届冬季奥林匹克运动会将于2022年2月在北京和张家口市联合举行。现面向社会招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据自己的情况写一封申请信。内容包括：

1.热爱体育；2.英语流利；3.性格外向开朗；有组织能力

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. ____________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.

I am LiHua, an 18–year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.

Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请信，格式正确，文章包含了所有要点，布局合理，使用高级句子。I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.同位语从句和动词不定式一般式的被动式完美结合；I am LiHua, an 18 –year- old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time同位语和定语从句运用巧妙；I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game .结果状语从句用在句中；I can speak English fluently ,which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble Meanwhile,非限制性定语从句在句中体现；not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.倒装句堪称经典；Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position.过去分词的独立主格结构巧妙至极；另外，.Besides, Meanwhile, I would be grateful if---，的运用为文章增色添彩。