Question

【题目】短文写作

假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jim问你什么是“广场舞”。请写一封回信介绍：

1. 什么是广场舞；

2. 广场舞的利与弊；

3. 你认为该如何协调老年人健身的需求与其他人休息的需要。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头与结语已给出，不算入字数。

Dear Jim,

I’ve received your letter inquiring square dancing.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I’ve received your letter inquiring square dancing.

In China, some retired people gather on the square or in the park to dance together in the early morning or evening. People call it square dancing. It is a good way of keeping fit, especially for the elderly. However, the noise caused by the loud music really affects the normal life and study of residents living nearby. Besides, square dancing takes up too many public places, like parks and squares, annoying other users. Considering the current situation, I think that the dancers should keep the music down to an acceptable level, and arrange their dancing time properly. What’s more, in order to reduce the inconvenience to others, organizers should carefully choose suitable places to dance in and more importantly, dancers and residents should learn to tolerate, understand and respect each other.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求写回信向外国朋友Jim介绍什么是“广场舞”。要点包括：1.什么是广场舞；2.广场舞的利与弊；3.你认为该如何协调老年人健身的需求与其他人休息的需要。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：非谓语动词的用法caused by the loud music，annoying other users，Considering the current situation等；宾语从句that the dancers should keep the music down to an acceptable level。keeping fit，affects the normal life，acceptable level，reduce the inconvenience等词汇及However, Besides, What’s more, more importantly 等连接词。