Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day King Arthur saw a happy beggar (乞丐) and wondered why the beggar was so happy, because that the king didn’t feel happy though she could have whatever he wants. From this we can see that one’s happiness doesn’t depend whether he is rich nor poor. Happy is just a state of mind. As long as one thinks he’s satisfied, he is happy.

There are many different opinion about happiness. To some, happiness is being surround by their family members and friends. To others, happiness means achieving success in something, such as meet a goal. To those who have been injured, happiness can simple mean a day without suffering, or just being alive.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去 because 后面的 that

【2】she – he

【3】wants – wanted

【4】depend后加 on/upon

【5】nor – or

【6】Happy –Happiness或Happy 前加Being

【7】opinion – opinions

【8】surround – surrounded

【9】meet – meeting

【10】simple – simply

【解析】

【1】去 because 后面的 that 考查连词。Because是连词，不用that来引导；

【2】she – he 考查代词。句意：因为虽然他能做他想做的事，但他仍然不高兴；

【3】wants – wanted 考查动词的时态。本文用一般过去时来叙述，故用wanted。

【4】depend后加 on/upon 考查固定短语。Depend on 依靠；

【5】nor – or 考查固定搭配。Whether …or 是。。。。还是。。

【6】Happy –Happiness或Happy 前加Being 考查名词。句意：幸福只是一种心情。名词做主语；

【7】opinion – opinions 考查名词的复数。Many 后面加名词的复数形式；

【8】surround – surrounded 考查动词短语。Be surrounded by 被。。所围绕；

【9】meet – meeting 考查非为主动词 。such as 后面加名词或动名词。

【10】simple – simply 考查副词。句意：对于那些受伤的人来说，幸福就是没有苦痛或者就是活着；

考点 ：短文改错。