Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；
2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保，有利健康等。
参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）  节能（energy saving）
注意： 1.词数：120词左右；
2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，该部分不计入总词数。
Good morning， everyone，
I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride  Bicycle”.   
                                                                              
                                                                              
Thank you !

Answer 1

不唯一
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m convened, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us.

解析试题分析：演讲稿的主题部分应该阐述清楚事情的缘由、结果和要求。以详细完整地介绍污染给我们的生活带来的影响。然后再叙述骑自行车的好处。发言稿以简单句为主要的表达形式。同时，演讲稿的语言必须有感染力，所以演讲稿可以使用祈使句、感叹句、强调句等句式来达到这种目的。写作时要注意适当地使用关联词承前启后，用词要得体，符合语言环境。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：选用恰当的语言，合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。