Question

假如你是成都七中的学生叶子，你的网友Peter听说美国第一夫人米歇尔(Michelle Obama)访问了你的学校，他想了解当时的情况。请按照以下要点给Peter回一封邮件。
1. 具体情况：1）发表演讲并与学生互动；2）与40名学生上了一堂英语课；
3）参与了一节太极课。
2. 发表自己的感想。
注意：1．词数100左右；     2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好； 4. 参考词汇：太极------ Tai Chi
Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school.                                              
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
In the last letter, you’d like to know something about Mrs. Obama’s visit in our school. Now, I am writing to share some information and my feelings with you.
Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us. Then /Afterwards, she participated in an English class with 40 students and had a lively discussion on varieties of topics including how students can deal with competition and failure, the value of studying abroad. What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class.
Although the First Lady did not spend a long time here, her visit really impressed me and made me know more about American education and culture. I sincerely hope that our school can organize more cultural exchange activities like this to broaden our horizons and enrich our lives.
Yours sincerely,
Ye Zi

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你是成都七中的学生叶子，你的网友Peter听说美国第一夫人米歇尔(Michelle Obama)访问了你的学校，他想了解当时的情况。请按照以下要点给Peter回一封邮件。1. 具体情况：1）发表演讲并与学生互动；2）与40名学生上了一堂英语课； 3）参与了一节太极课。2. 发表自己的感想。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】Mrs. Obama began her visit by giving us a speech, during which she told her own stories, highlighted the importance of education and interacted with us.这里含有一个定语从句；What impressed me most is that she observed and actively participated in a Tai Chi class. 这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。
考点：提纲类书面表达