Question

请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文，简单描述一下2014年云南省鲁甸县地震。

1. 地震于2014年8月3日发生在云南省鲁甸县；

2. 震后发生火灾和泥石流；

3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，马路出现裂痕，水电供应中断；

4. 有些建筑物里的水管爆裂开来，地上一些洞穴冒出了蒸汽；

5. 地震共造成617人死亡；112人失踪，3143人受伤，还有很多无家可归者；

6. 震后解放军战士提供救助：提供食品和水，搭建避难所。

要求:

1. 短文必须包括要点中的所有内容；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；

3. 参考词汇：泥石流mud-rock flow 县county

4. 词数:120左右。

Answer 1

On August 3rd ,2014 a big earthquake hit Rudian County Yunnang Province. After the earthquake happened, it seemed that the world was at an end, because there were fires and mud-rock flow. Houses and tall buildings fell down. People found cracks on the road, which caused difficulties for driving. Water and electricity were cut off. The water pipes in some buildings cracked and burst and steam burst from holes in the ground. There were disasters everywhere. In a few seconds the whole county was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached 617. Besides, 3143 were injured and a large number of people lost their homes. Soon after the quakes, the army sent soldiers to help the rescue work. They provided food and fresh water and built shelters for survivors whose homes had been destroyed.

【解析】：题目要求根据汉语提示完成作文，提示中提到了地震发生的时间和地点，地震带来的灾害，地震后的房屋、地面以及建筑物等出现的不同程度的损坏情况都需要包含在文章中，记叙表达要有逻辑、顺序，文章前后要连贯。并且有关地震后的伤亡情况和救援情况也需要一一的说明。文章在包含提示的所有内容的同时也可根据题目的背景环境，适当增加细节，是文章更加的丰满，但注意只能适当添加。最后提示给出了文章有关的生词，可适当使用。亮点说明：首先文章将题目要求的所有方面都描述了，文章开头就直奔主题。其中 “it seemed that the world was at an end”用it做形式主语后接了一个主语从句，后面还用了很多短语如“ fell down.”“cut off”“ in ruins”“a large number of ”等。且文章使用的报道形式，让人有身临其境的感觉。问题说明：整篇文章只有一个自然段，并且只描述文章描述汉语提示中的内容，句子之间缺乏必要的连接词，衔接不够连贯。句子过于简短，并且缺乏句型的变换，过于平实。

考点：考查报道式应用文写作。