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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was late when we left the restaurant. We have already crossed a long bridge when I discovered I had left my purse at the restaurant. It was nothing we could do but to turn around. There was no chance we could return to the restaurant before the closed time. Then we remembered a friend of us who lived six block from a restaurant. He listened to our story carefully but then he promised he would run over to the restaurant, that my purse had been left. Finally, we recovered the purse. Our friend sounded delightedly to have been a part of this little adventure. Beside finding the lost purse, I also had a sense of great happiness.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文是一篇记叙文，叙述作者把钱包忘在餐馆，朋友帮助去取的经过。

1.句意：当我发现我把钱包忘在餐厅里的时候，我已经穿过了一座长桥。根据句意可知是“过去的过去”，可知用过去完成时态，故把have---had。

2. It was nothing we could do but to turn around.此句应该是there be句型，“除了回去去取没有什么可做的。”，故把It---There。

3. we could do but to turn around此句中but前面有实义动词do，则后面的动词不定式不加to，故去掉句中的to。

4.固定句式：There is no chance that---，毫无疑问，此处that引导同位语从句，故在chance后加that。

5. who lived six block此处的名词应该用复数形式，故把block---blocks。

6. from a restaurant此处特指上文提到的餐厅，故把a---the。

7. He listened to our story carefully but then he promised he would run over to the restaurant,他仔细听我们的故事并且他许诺他会---。可知此处表示并列关系，故把but---and。

8. he would run over to the restaurant,此处the restaurant是先行词，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做地点状语，故把that---where。

9. Our friend sounded delightedly此句中sound听起来，是连系动词，形容词作表语，“感到高兴”，故把delightedly---delighted。

10. Beside finding the lost purse,除了找到钱包之外，我也---。Beside在---旁边，根据拘役可知把Beside改成Besides除---之外，还有---。