Question

【题目】假如你是李华，英国交换生Anna将来你校学习中文并住在你家(幸福路58号)。请你应她的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生活。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Anna,

I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.

My home is at No.58, Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street, and you’ll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and it’s easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you there.

I can’t wait to see you in China.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一封信，关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，本文的主题是向英国交换生介绍你家周边的情况。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和图片之间的关系；灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将图片中各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当；语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写要点的情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等等。

【亮点说明】考生写作要有灵活性，表现出具有较好的英语语言表达能力。范文使用了很好的方位词、短语和从句：opposite对面，crossroads 十字路口，southeast corner东南角，lies坐落，walk north for about 300 meters向北走约300米，on the right 在右边，At the east end of在东方的尽头，can’t wait to迫不及待去做……。A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street和On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need.在上述两句中两个由“where”引导的是非限制性定语从句。it’s easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home本句中“as”引导的是原因状语从句。