Question

最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class activities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

1. 你参加的课外活动及给你带来的好处。（社团活动；体育运动；上网…）

2. 为同学选择课外活动提出建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右。

2. 稿件的开头以为你写好，不计入总词数。

3. 注释：社团--- club

After-school activities

Nowadays, after- school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】

After-school activities

Nowadays, after-school activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much.

In my spare time, doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. Besides building up my body and enriching / increasing my knowledge (broadening my minds / horizons), they also relax me after a long day of hard work. In addition, I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people.

Here I have some suggestions. As students, you’d better choose after-school activities that interest you and suit you. It’s also very important for you to balance well between studies and activities.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，话题是After-class activities，和学生的生活密切相关，要点都已经给出，1. 你参加的课外活动及给你带来的好处。（社团活动；体育运动；上网…）

2. 为同学选择课外活动提出建议。具体内容还要考生自己发挥，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文的句子：doing sports and surfing the Internet are my favorite, which do me a lot of good. 和I take an active part in school club activities, in which I not only develop my organizing skills but also learn how to deal with people. 还要适当的关联词把文章连贯起来：如：besides，in addition等。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。

点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。