Question

16．爬山（mountain climbing）是一项很好的运动，修身养性，但涉及环保和森林防火隐患等问题．请你就爬山这项运动的优缺点谈谈自己的看法，写一篇英语短文．
词数：120字左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文为议论文写作．人称以第三人称为主，时态为一般现在时．写作要点为：爬山的优缺点．
重点短语和句型：
offer sb a chance 给某人提供机会
benefit sth对…有好处
shape one's character 塑造人格
likely可能地
worth doing 值得做某事
高分句型：
一、…some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain，which has become a real headache for the cleaners．
本句包含while引导的时间状语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句．
二、Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile！
本句为only开头的倒装句，助动词can放在主语we前．

解答 Nowadays there is an increasing number of people who go in for mountain climbing．Indeed，it is an awesome outdoor sport，which can offer us a chance to get close to nature．While climbing a mountain，we can enjoy beautiful views along the way and totally relax ourselves after tiring work or study．Besides，it can not only benefit our health but also shape our character．（爬山的优点）
   However，mountain climbing is also likely to cause some negative effects．Take environmental protection for example，some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain，which has become a real headache for the cleaners．【高分句型一】What's worse，many forest fires are caused by cigarette ends which are left behind carelessly by some smokers．（爬山的缺点）
   To sum up，mountain climbing is a sport worth joining in．But when climbing a mountain，we must pay attention to the two problems mentioned above．Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile!（总结）【高分句型二】

点评 考生在写作时需明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅．考生在平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．