Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Peter来信询问你如何才能学好汉语。请你根据下列信息写封回信。词数100词左右。回信应包括如下内容：

1. 多看汉语电视剧，常读汉语报纸和书刊；

2. 学唱汉语歌曲，多和中国人交流；

3. 常来中国，身临其境，交中国朋友；

4. 留学到中国，必要时参加汉语学习培训班。

注意：1. 不必逐字逐句翻译； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I’m delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese very well.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese very well.

As a good friend of yours, I’d like to give you a few suggestions. To begin with, you’d better watch Chinese TV series more often; it’s beneficial for you to read Chinese newspapers, books and magazines. Then, if possible, it is helpful for you to learn some Chinese songs and communicate with Chinese people. Meanwhile, you can often come to China to be personally on the scene so as to make more Chinese friends. In the end, why not come to China to study abroad? If so and necessary, you can also attend training courses in Chinese learning to improve your Chinese.

Would you love to write letters in Chinese?

Best wishes

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达是要求写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、仔细研读题目所给信息，不要误解信息，也不要漏掉要点，明确自己是以哪个身份来写这封信。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构，符合书信口吻和语气。词汇短语丰富，如be beneficial for，communicate with。还用到了then、meanwhile和in the end，结构分明，很有层次感。