Question

假设你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“如何做一个好学生”。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。短文中须包括以下要点：

1、严格自律,刻苦学习

2、尊敬师长,乐于助人

3、遵守校规,不染恶习

4、不无故旷课, 不以强凌弱.

5、不断进步,实现目标

注意：1 词数：100左右。

2 内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

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It’s important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we became good students?

Answer 1

How to be a good student

It is important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we become good students? In my opinion, those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking, drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones. Being good students, we should show respect to our teachers and the elderly and be always ready to help others. Besides we must obey the school regulations, and try not to form the bad habits, such as being addicted to playing computer games, telling lies and teasing and bulling the weak.

In a word, good students are always trying their best to make constant progress so that they can achieve their goals.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。假设你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“如何做一个好学生”。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。短文中须包括以下要点：1、严格自律,刻苦学习 2、尊敬师长,乐于助人3、遵守校规,不染恶习 4、不无故旷课, 不以强凌弱.

5、不断进步,实现目标。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意字数，词数100左右。

【亮点说明】 In my opinion, those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking, drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones.这里含有一个定语从句。

考点：提纲类书面表达